Still working on song please give me feedback/advice!!

Have not finished yet because I ran out of ideas. Feedback, ideas, and advice welcome!!

This is the original. The Other one I edited the Eq and stuff.

Not sure about this one. Lots of sounds it kinda seems busy. Let me Know what you think.

I like this one the most out the songs ive made so far

still tying to get the hang of it made & w/o MIDI Keyboard

Another repetitive song still tying to get the hang of it. Dont have a MIDI Keyboard yet

I am just getting started. I know its repetitive and sounds amateur.